"Open Mouth, Insert Foot"
(aka "Uh, Can I Take That Again, From The Top?"
GillyH, July '99
J/C PG
'Dark Frontier' was a very good episode, but several inconsistant plot devices - including a major character behaviour cock-up on Janeway (and some might even say on Chakotay and his observations, too), spoilt it a little for me. Still, I can turn it to my J/C advantage!
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While Kathryn and Harry admired the shiny 'techie stuff' from the
Borg vessel, Chakotay fondly watched her every move.
Suddenly, he saw something that made his blood run cold: Kathryn
was fiddling with her Commbadge.
"Maybe I should go to Red Alert, Kathryn?"
"Pardon?"
"You're about to drop a bombshell. Fiddling with your
combadge is a dead giveaway, you do it every time."
Her smile froze and he saw two huge tears glisten in her eyes
before she stormed out, shouting, "I'll be in my cabin, in the dark,
for the next 53 days!"
"Oh, nice one, Chuckles!" groaned Harry.
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The End
"Cinderella-Rockafellar"
GillyH, July '99
J/C PG
3rd season Voyager when they were allowed to flirt and tease - and it was a joy to watch.
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"Oh, no!"
Chakotay hurried to her bedroom door, "Captain? Everything alright?"
The door opened to reveal a hand holding a strappy shoe, "Can you fix this? It's my last pair and I've no credits."
~*~
By the time Kathryn reappeared - looking stunning in a short, black dress - there was a newly replicated pair of shoes waiting for her.
"Oh, Chakotay, you shouldn't have! I could have worn my uniform."
"And deprived me of those gorgeous legs?"
Blushing like a schoolgirl, she slipped on the shoes and made a silent vow. He'd never, ever know that he'd replicated for two left feet.
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The End